En el video los recluso comian almuzar a junots cada dia. Uno recluso puso los drogas en la coctelera de sal. Con que sabe un otro un recluso usar un coctelera de sal. El(He) usao mucho sal en su comida. Esta(this) recluso actuaba muy loco y tonto. Los drogas cambiaron un conduct. Los guardia de reclusos no les gustaron un conducto . Todos los reclusos se meteia un lios. Los hombre dude ser actuar como hombre.
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Nice description of the events Emily. However, I would recommend you to revise the following things in your text:
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2. Some of the verbs are in present tense or the conjugation needs to be revised, such as at the beginning and at the end of the story.
3. There is no need to put the translation of the words in parenthesis.
Good luck in your revision!